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Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:18 am
I will dish out some constructive criticism, since I have a BFA and thats what we are taught to do for our peers / fellow artists. (Graphite drawing was / is my bag of tricks, so it's easier for me to help ya.) Here we go.
Text is hit or miss when dealing with art. Unless it's essential to the piece, I'd say 4/5 times it's a miss. This is mainly because it's either 1) Distracting. Or 2) Imperfect (trying to replicate by hand/eye.) Since you completed this drawing freehand, replicating text is extremely difficult without proper measuring, and tons time devoted to making it absolutely perfect.In this case, I'd have left out the decals. (Except the "Z" and "Nissan" badges, of course).
It's clear that the bulk of the time was donated towards the detail in the wheels / headlights / reflection in the paint.. and it shows! They look great. However, because of this, these become strong focal points, and the rest of the car gets a little lost. They are arguably the most difficult pars of the car to draw- that being said, you can't let that consume the piece.To fix this, I would suggest using your artistic license to sharpen and soften some parts of these elements, so that the entire piece balances out a little bit. Or even, change the 'focus' of the piece so that it appears that the photo was taken with a shallow depth of field.
From my drawing experiences, I have gotten really good at drawing something exactly as it appears. BUT- you have to remember, that no matter how spot-on it looks to you in reference to your source image, it still may not look 'right' to other viewers. Thats where your talent comes into play, and you can manipulate the image however you need to, to make it appear as real as possible.
Otherwise, your renderings are great! Don't take this this as me bashing your stuff, cause I'm not. I'm trying to make it better for you, and your clients. (Some people in school took this type of criticism personally... which you can't let it come off that way)
You may know this already, but I don't know your art background- So I'm just telling you how it was for me.
Check out some graphite renderings by Kent Bellows... he was a master, and is one of my long-time drawing idols.
Keep up the good work.