My song about racism

[twelv]

http://geeksquad.bandcamp.com/track/the ... -uni-verse

tell me what do you think.

[Otto.]

I'm don't usually like Rap or Hip-Hop with vocals but I really like this. The production is good and I like the music. Good to hear music with lyrics that actually mean something too.

[bluepillow]

I like it, but I wish the verses were longer.

*edit* For example I much rather prefer the flow you have in Blowin' on a Cartridge.

[Jesda]

It lacks song structure. I'm a fan of minimalism, but even effective minimalism follows some kind of structure.

[Amays U G37S]

Racism is real.

This is good.

[orangeNblue]

I like it...the beat is sick and i like the blend of the singer and the rapper, good job man

[AZhitman]

I dig.

[mixeds14]

good beat to it..

[themadscientist]

I bailed early when that weird voice started singing.

[Bubba1]

I bailed early when that weird voice started singing.

I have never quite understood the appeal of speedreading in a monotone to a drumbeat, but I'm also not a target demographic for hip hop.

[Jesda]

I bailed early when that weird voice started singing.

I have never quite understood the appeal of speedreading in a monotone to a drumbeat, but I'm also not a target demographic for hip hop.

That, to me, is when it ceases to be a song and devolves into rhythmic poetry.

[troskinatior]

Johnny rebel has alot of good songs about racism

[breadbox]

I let a few friends listen to your Album last night and they all dug it.

[twelv]

Chorus

Inside a boy i found the universe and in his eye are a 1000 stars on a dark sky.

verse 1

There was little boy who didn't care that he was blue/
Saw a little red boy and asked him to play a little game of peek-a-boo/
The red boy said "Who are you? Don't you recognize your own color?/
And my mommy and dad would get really mad if they saw us playing wit each other."/
The blue boy said "I'm just trying to play games; I ain't trying to hurt you/
And don't you realize that if we coincide that we could make the color purple."/
The red boy looked him in the eye and replied "Man, why don't you play with the yellow girl/ And make a little green but don't cause a scene trying to play with me. Man, tell the world/ To change. But don't try to change me cause I'm always gonna be red/
And purple's for Urkel's, it's never gonna work so that chapter'll never be read/
In the book of life it's looking like humans can never fight the curse/
Forced to hate each other but we can be brothers if only inside of a united verse.

Here is the first verse I hope you get the message at least.
Sorry it was not about 37" wheels and money we don't really.
This a real story that happen to one us so we put it into a song.

[twelv]

I let a few friends listen to your Album last night and they all dug it.

Thank you.