Your photography was very good, but I think you need to work on the audio. If you have dialogue, you need to lower the volume of the music so they don't compete. at :55, for example, there was a real mishmosh of sound that they made it painful and confusing to listen to. Also, around 3:00, while the car was being repaired, you had full throttle racing sounds. If that was in the background, it was way too loud it made it seem like you had editting problems.. Also, you had one gap in a very good story. You put up a banner about disaster strikes. No pics,no description, not even the car being towed in to get an idea of the extent of the problem. You could have inserted a description comment by someone in his crew to bridge the gap.
Overall, well done. Ferrari Challenge races are very cool, but so expensive to participate. I have a former student who used to compete with a 348 Cup Challenge car. Very fast machine.