can someone review my wiring? pics included

[fender-startocaster]

whats up guys, havent been able to start my car after a kade swap and was wondering if someone can review my wiring. thanks ^^^ wiring. notice how i wired the yellow/red wire. is that correct?each wire is individually wrapped^^ each wire is individually wrapped then all wrapped in a bundle. is this a problem?^^ is it possible for the pins in the plug to be lose?park neutral switch: read the diy wrong and canibalized the entire plug. would this cause a problem?after a few long days of no result i switched to the ka24e icm and now it starts but dies. any ideas?unknown connectorrandom engine shotsrandom again.

[fender-startocaster]

c'mon guys dont be shy.